So last evening I had the privilege to collaborate with a kind gentleman that thought it might be cool to write a poem with me. I thought absolutely why not! Being that I have never really done this, I let him take the lead…kissing was our subject and it was actually quite a quick process. So the poem didn’t take long to write. He had no need to edit his portion…Yet I, always editing something 🙄, changed a little on my end! He didn’t mind me being a woman that changes her mind or her words! Hahaha! Thank You
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B’s words (bold)
M’s words (italicized)
My tongue dances
gently in your mouth,
my hand grazes
your soft cheek
I open to the ways
of your hunger
my lips full
craving your verse
My mind is racing
faster than a bullet,
Aching to slide
my finger in your depths
to feel you moan
Your mouth turning greedy
I understand its movement
its intention
my back arching, I push into you
as heated moans begins to rise
Fingers are slipping rapidly
the ecstasy is the fire dripping
from your lips as I’m throbbing
trace me
lips willingly aflame
with the tip of desire
fire coming into me
as my thighs began
to part in anticipation
My thoughts are in disarray
Only the waves guide me
in whispering in your ear
that I must taste you
I am awaken
by the breathlessness of you
part me
summon the seas
taste as I bend to your will
My mouth travels
to devour your wetness
Your pleasure
is my treasure
the slowing of time
urging
pressing our need
take your fill
as I spill onto you
Nicely done.
Interesting to see how both perspectives came together to paint a wonderful visual. It’s also intriguing to see things from both a male and female perspective.
Interesting concept. ☺
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Thank you! A It was interesting. I write from a feeling perspective. Yet I had to consider his words and try to tie mine to his. So thinking had to occur. Lol😌
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It’s interesting that you mentioned writing from a feeling perspective, I’m the same way. But lately B has been challenging me to push past my comfort zone to find a different source. I accepted his challenge and have since started 2 new series currently running on our blog.
It’s great to have his input as we hammer out blog ideas daily. A fresh point of view is always good. Glad the experience was a positive one.
Look forward to reading more of your work. Your writing style is very subtle but evocative. Kudos. ☺
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That is awesome! To be stretched and pushed or pulled. It further enhances your ability to write well. Keep pushing past it lovely! 💫
And thank you for your kind compliments. Xoxo
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Thank you for chatting. Always great to hear how new ideas are formed. Plus we’re investing a bit of extra time to get to know our followers. We appreciate the love we get from all of you! Hugs🌷
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That’s a really well done piece of writing. Hot and erotic without being too direct.
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Thank you so much. it just was a simple process of writing back and forth and just kind of flowed. 😌
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🙂
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That’s one he’ll of a kiss and one brilliant collaboration.
Well done to both of you this is brilliantly written.
Such arousing imagery and aches of the desire for that moment to never end.
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Thank you so very much Cameron! It was a fun collaboration. Don’t we all just crave a passionate kiss? 😆
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Indeed we do 😙
It’s such a wonderful display of passion, you two really got swept up in the fun, it makes the piece so much better seeing the enjoyment jump out at the reader!
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😌😄
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Thank you!
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Anytime ❤
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Easy to get swept up into that kiss. Beautifully done!
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For some reason this evokes a distant, mysterious memory. Should that be so?
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